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The pose is good here and you have a good model but the lighting and aperture have given you a completely flat image. There are a couple of things that woul have drastically improved this, firstly shooting on a wider aperture to throw everything but the model out of focus would have made the image stand out more. Secondly, and more importantly is the lighting, anything to give some kind of modelling to the face and body would have helped. Unfortunately the model blends into the background and there is no depth to this shot. Hope that's helpful, if not please feel free to PM me |