It looks like you set this up in front of your dishwasher or some other big appliance. Not a great choice for a background. I don't understand the choice to show two boxes. The box on the left is just more business in an already busy composition. A single (REAL) flower, the suds, soap, and one box would have been much more effective. The swans and silk flower arrangement are just kind of cheesy looking. After viewing it for awhile, a finally get that the background I'm seeing is the bathroom tile and the lower edge of a mirror. I was seeing the mirror as a chrome handle on an appliance.
Next time, create a still-life on a table against a simple background (matte white paper or poster board) with only the product and one or two other items (like flowers, petals, etc.).
Really nice try. The bubbles are a bit over exposed and there are a few shadows. Maybe next time try to difuse the light a little and a little fill flash.
A good idea, the foam around it really brings across the message of a soft soap. However the background needs some more attention. the pink thing on the left, the frame of the mirror don't really add anything. The vase and ducks (?) could still be used but maybe in a more concentrated composition. the foam looks also a bit overexposed, looses detail.
I love the product image, but lose the extraneous elements (Silk flowers look really bad here). Get rid of the pink thing on the left and crop to the top of the nearer swan's head or lower.
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