The reflection wouldn't be there in an advertisement. Also, with the clouds and the rain drops it makes it a gloomy picture. Not many adds associate gloom with there product.
Photographically, it's a nice subject and it's well taken.
Cool subject but it is a bit dark and high contrast (very few middle values). The reflection on the bus is distracting and there is some kind of pole sticking out from the top.
If you could have removed the vehicles being reflected in the side of this VW Bus, I would have rated this higher. Other then that, the image is very nice, not to loud, not to quiet either...
An excellent angle - great use of your lens. I find the reflections of other cars in the side of the van and the poll in behind don't add a lot. If you ever get the chance to reshoot (for your portfolio), you may want to try moving the van to the middle of nowhere and taking the same shot. Very well done and composed though.
Nice wax job! The reflection in the blue is great. Because an image with a VW won previously, I think that might hurt you this time around. A little dark on the bottom half of the photo though. Not much detail there.
VW's have that happy fun image (even though I've never met one that didn't break down all the time) the image could be really powerful and effective as an ad if it had more of that happy vibe. A little brighter, no pole coming out of the roof, maybe the reflection of a beautiful landscape (rather than the parking lot), and somebody hanging out the window to illustrate what a great job the "VW Transporter" is. Anyway, those are just some thoughts. The photo is well focused, sharp and has an interesting angle.
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