I this is a wonderful idea...the dark skin, exposed back, red dress. It looks like it could be a painting from the 20s or 30s...except for the ceiling fan. The ceiling fan bugs me. The way her face exposed is also a little creepy...looks like a skull. I would give that another shot...I think you're on to something fantastic.
I see what you were going for here. I think it could have turned out better (in my mind) if you would have used a flash at the end to give the lady some solidness.
I really like this and your title. The lit rim of the mirror on the right takes my eye away from the girl though, but that's just me. The dark quality of your image and the red dress are perfect together.