Sorry this didn't finish higher - you fell victim to the 'shot' not in your execution which is gorgeous. Of course having such a beautiful model is a HUGE help!!
Wow I love the overall look of the image, the colors even look very Kodachromish....however, the brightness of the eyes is a bit over-done in my opinion. Looks a tad unnatural. However, overall nice image. 7
Nice try... I think you found a very nice model and really good sourcing on the cloth... But... She looks tired and bored, not intimidated... 6, would have been an 8 with a better expression... Sorry.