I have to grant you most original in this challenge. The photo as a whole though is blurred. I might have just shot the woman and left out all of the other stuff.
hmm. i know the water is dripping, but there is no real sense of 'stopped motion' in this shot. you could prolly have had a better picture just doing a sharp candid,- the water stream wouldnt have come out any better but your picture itself would be more useable.
I'm sure you've gotten enough comments about the blur, but it's very distracting from the image. A lower angle might also have made this shot more immediate.
it looks like you have some hand shake, try propping the camera against something, or practice holding it still, bracing your arms against your body. I can never hold a camera still, alas.
I think it would be better if you got closer to your subject or cropped closer to the subject. Also, looks like you might have needed a faster shutter speed to really stop the motion, but it's hard to tell.
Way too much going on in this photo to see the stop action. Not a nice clean capture and the skin tones aren't the best:( At first I thought this was a scanned photo. I don't mean to offend but I do want to be honest:) A closer more focused shot of your subject would have been much better. I hope this is a helpful critque.