Image is a bit flat to me. Colors could use a bit more "pop" and focus / sharpness is a bit off / too soft for my tastes. Fill flash may have helped this onhe.
Sorry, but this doesn't really feel like a comercial to me. More like a picture of apricots. I woudl have liked a bit more sun reflected on teh apricots, to have the california feeling, if you know what i mean. You know, bright sun shine
Í´m sorry but I don´t know what is your main subject. A lot of elements. I think it´s better to show less elements but do it in focus, and show its texture.