Having what I assume to be your extraordinary entry visible on this shot takes away your anonymity. That said, your shot is very visually "busy" in that there is too much for the eye to take in, preventing a main focal point from emerging. Technically, focus and lighting are good but could both be a bit better, especially on the keyboard and light meter. Good attempt. :o)
a little too busy and the darks seem to run together, the light meter fading into the laptop and the phone (stylus?) a little convoluted from this angle.
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