I like the composition a lot just not the harsh glare or over-sharpening as much. I think framing needs to include the entire eye of the peacock feather and a little more room around the subject's eye. The glare is detracting from the similar colors of the feather and eye makeup.
Very artistic and I love the wash out. Perhaps a little more work on the pupils, maybe a bit of burn would have made this even better for me. Overall, I like this - 8