I'm sorry to say this doesn't look very peaceful. It rather looks like an "Look how cool I am..." MySpace profile photo.
Next time think about how tonal range and key adds or subtracts from your message. From your title, I'd expect something mid-range or high key. Low key images suggest a dark moodiness that contraindicates "peace." Next, the eyes are closed; I'd have expected based on the title that the subject would have an unflinching gaze or at least the eyes open.
Better luck next time. |