I know you wanted to get the lights in the shot but there is too much negative space. Especially the road in front. I also have a problem with the light that obliterates the name of the place which should be the focal point. A really good idea that needs just a bit of work, I think. DPz
This photo needs something, like a thousand people on the outside waiting to get in. As far as grand openings go, this looks more like a regular day. The people being there would make it a whole lot more newspaper worthy - Inspzil
Good idea. I think it should have been cropped a little more, though. And you should have slid right a little so the street light did not obscure the name of the place.
Maybe if you'd pulled a little more to the right and gotten the rest of the building the ight wouldn't be right in front of the words. But still a very good night picture. Beautifully lit like it's poseing for you. Makes me want to read the article and see what kind of food they serve and what's in the showroom. Good job. Great photo. Maybe a little soft on the focus - just a little. Crop it closer to the left side, but overall good photo. PTL7
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