I wish we had a chance to see more of the work, the very narrow DOF isn't helping here. good color balance and framing. On reflection, I don't see how that wide cut pencil is supposed to create what looks like a very fine series of lines
Haha for a split second I thought you were filling out a standardized test and I thought It would be a really odd long lost passion. On closer inspection you are sketching, and I should take more breaks from studying for the GRE.