I seriously do not understand the context you were trying to portray here. There is not even a title to help the viewer along in terms of finding your direction. What is the focus? Why is he holding a book? Why is he doing this when she's sweeping? There's nowhere for the viewer to look and comprehend the scene, no cultural reference points.
The charisma and charm of her body language with the broom suddenly swept over him, and he was lost in a fit of passion.
"Will you marry me?" he implored. "I need you so badly, and I realized it so suddenly, I didn't even have time to kneel. Or put my book down. Will you be mine?"
"I don't know," she said. "Let me finish sweeping first."
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