I'm going through the entries, stopping at those images I feel have had the benefit of an unconventional eye and dwelling a little longer to try to see and appreciate what you saw. This is one of those images.
Positives: Well you've certainly managed to pull of an abstraction of this scene, I particularly like the 'wavy' characteristics in the image. I like the unusual colour palette too.
Critical stuff: In my mind there is something missing here; something that moves this picture from subtle and beautiful to something that is a little over-done. I wish I could give you more of a clue as to why that is but I really can't put my finger on it. The bright speck certainly doesn't help.
Overall: I commend you vision here and I like what this nearly is - perhaps it made it all the way for you (I hope so), but for me, it isn't pushing my buttons.