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Comments Made During the Challenge
07/13/2004 09:03:25 PMPost actions
has a good feel - would inspire a good copywriter
07/13/2004 01:33:28 PMPost actions
Original and well observed. Nice composition. Maybe some more contrast and saturation would have improved the impression. Anyway, - I like it!
07/13/2004 12:43:40 AMPost actions
Needs a lot more contrast. Also, I just don't get it. How would this be an advertisement?
07/12/2004 02:53:57 PMPost actions
Would be much better with a little more contrast.
07/11/2004 02:51:34 PMPost actions
very contrasty. lacks saturation.
07/11/2004 04:34:45 AMPost actions
Contrast isn't right for me... other than that the hair under the plume looks just like my beard.
07/10/2004 09:58:07 AMPost actions
A little washed out, but a great composition!
07/09/2004 11:29:04 AMPost actions
07/08/2004 05:41:13 PMPost actions
Needs to be sharper and a little better focus? Maybe a color feather? Does not not grab me and make me interested in the hat.
07/08/2004 09:41:39 AMPost actions
To overexposed so it has lost a lot of its crispness, Maybe play with the contrast a bit more.
07/08/2004 06:24:51 AMPost actions
The title doesn't sound much like advertising copy. I don't get it. The photo is very washed out and drab. If the hats are the products, they don't look attractive enough that I'd want one. For one thing, the hat on the person's head has grit and lint in the brim. The person's grizzled, dry, grey hair isn't too lovely either.
07/07/2004 09:35:45 PMPost actions
Contrast seems a bit dark. Nothing overly interesting to portray the hats though.
07/07/2004 11:05:36 AMPost actions
try to adjust level a little...
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07/07/2004 12:58:01 AMPost actions
The images is overexposed (my monitor is very preciesly calibrated), and lacks a punch.
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07/07/2004 12:28:07 AMPost actions
this is so washed out, it makes it hard to focus on the hats.
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