you might want to try getting a a soft white light for illumination indoors because most camera flashes arnt good past about 9 feet. The combination of the back light from the window and the weak flash make this a dark picture. Also some cameras adjust exposure based on the brightest source it can see.
I think your photo is to dark. He is also out of focus. I know he is jumping, but I can not see it. I feel you could have done a better job if you put some effort into it.
great picture! very entertaining, more so than a penthouse movie and a handful of paper tissues, and i also like the "decisive moment" which this picture shows beautifully.... i'm sure good old Bresson would have loved this......if he hadn't been dead, that is.....
Billy Joe Bob is too close to the top of the frame but he is a talented acrobat. I think a little added focus and sharpness would contribute to this overall quality of this photograph.
Nice idea, but the background doesn't help it much. The subject is out of focus as well. Maybe outside, against the sky would have been more interesting ?