I have been asked to give an indepth critique on this photo for the critique club...I pretty much summed it up in my original comment during voting, but I will attempt to be more descriptive. :0)
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Initial: This photo makes me feel sorry for the person.
Composition: The framing and angle are excellent for this photo. He is in chaos, and the angle adds to this feeling.
Technical: I mentioned that boosting the brightness/levels a bit would benefit this photo... I said this because his face is in such shadow, and the overall tone of the photo is dark. Not too bright...just enough to bring out more detail.
I am left wondering what he is doing. Writing a list? What is going thru his mind?
sad, fairly static portrait of an unfortunate person, rendered with extreme clarity from an interesting angle. a better title might it give it more zip. mag99
Great perspective. Catching someone in their own environment without them knowing is interesting. I really like the stairs along the top. I wonder how this would have looked as a vertical shot. The leaves along the right are distracting. ~indi
Don't understand your title but love your picture. It speaks volumns. Love the overhead view. That makes the photo. Good focus. Good composition with great execution. Great human interest story. PTL9
There is just too much going on in this shot..chaos to my eyes!! I can't get the focus on the subject with this perspective view. Also it's a bit dark. Justine
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