Nice try. It doesn't really say 'advertisement' to me.
Photographically, it's a bit too contrasty. The building has potential for interesting subject matter but this is a very literal portrayal. The overhead lighting and the scrubby trees in the background detract from any drama this might have.
excellent idea (here they're advertised as a handyman's dream!) good colours, focus, dof. Image looks a little oversharpened (? neat image) on my monitor.