you've got a very neat idea here. I especially like how the photograph is generally dark except for the light source inside the bag. The concept is top.
2 things i would have scored u higher for. First, i think one person looking into the bag would have had a stronger impact and would been enough to make ur point. Second, the girl on one knee has her hand in a somewhat awkward position/place, it looks like she on a cellphone or something. Overall very nice shot this should do well. |