Nice job with the white backdrop, but it looks like all the light is coming from bottom left, try to make the light come from top left to hit his face more
looks like your going for a Richard Avedon feel here, with the clean background and the almost stern expression, which I love! I would push in closer, cropping closer to the waist, which would emphasize the subjects expression. Also in this kind of image i find the color distracting, I would really "Avedon" it out and go black and white! Overall very good image!
It feels just a bit too far for me. While I can guess you wanted to get the hands in the pockets and keep the head on the top thirds line - it feels too far away and I can't see any detail in the face / eyes.
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