I think this one is better than the second. I like it more because I'm not a fan of the shadows from the collar. Your lighting on the second one also seems to trail off, particularly on the left side of the photo.
I like the pose in this one as well. Only quip is I'd try to soften up the light a bit more- you've got some hot spots. There are some hot spots, but you have relatively uniform lighting. Really, I think it's a pretty good product. |