I think that the square crop suite this type of shot really well. I don't know where to look in your show as it is hard to determine the focus point is there is a lot of white on white detail which is hard to see, maybe mono is not the best choice here. Of course if you are going for an emotive feel then I think you need some movement in the shot.
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