Nice scene and composition, but I'd like the railtracks to start in both bottom corners. Also, the sharpening halo around the trees bothers me. Aside from that, very good!
feels super bleak to me....hope that was the mood you were looking for. i would have liked to see more of the town on the sides of the tracks and have some space above the trees...but I like landscape shots...i know you were going for the whole follow the eye down the track thing...personally I'm not that interested in the tracks...i've seen the shot down the tracks alot...probably why i want to know more about the town on the sides. So if you would go and shoot your town, I'd be happier, but if you like shooting perspective track shots, keep going for it. if you choose the tracks, you should probably stand in the dead center of the track making the composition of the tracks symmetrical and your score higher-8