I've decided to comment on every shot in this challenge, since I'm sitting at 0 comments, and I'd rather try and take a positive approach to this rather than simply whining about my score:
A simple shot, but I feel it probably just lacks a little too much "oomph", if you will. The watch, partly hidden, doesn't have enough of a presence in the photograph, the tie is simply too much of a background element, and the suit is rendered secondary.