I've decided to comment on every shot in this challenge, since I'm sitting at 0 comments, and I'd rather try and take a positive approach to this rather than simply whining about my score:
A different take than most I've seen so far. I find it slightly busier around the model than I would like, as she seems to blend in a little too much. This isn't an automatically bad thing, depending on what you are aiming for, but when fashion should be the focus, and I'm left focusing more on the industrial setting, then there's been a little bit of a disconnect. |