I found these at the Hunter Museum in Chattanooga. I was struck by their simple form against the pattern on the wall. I like the tension created by the electrical outlet.
I'm going through the entries, stopping at those images I feel have had the benefit of an unconventional eye and dwelling a little longer to try to see and appreciate what you saw. This is one of those images.
Positives: This isn't a scene that too many people would take the time to capture - I'm glad you have. For me, this is all about the lines, the horizontals, the verticals and the wavy ones! The composition is particularly strong - I really enjoy the proportions of the yellow to blue.
Critical stuff: The white thing towards the bottom of the wall detracts an awful lot - I can't understand why you couldn't clone it out.... perhaps you couldn't pattern match too easily.
Overall: A nice geometric presentation which is pleasing to the eye but is spoilt by the interruption of geometry by the white thing
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