a nice shot, word or warning tho, titles that attempt to qualify the shot aren't usually recieved well, I know i don't like it. ca't really explain why but it just bugs me. I guess because it seems as tho you are soliciting sympathy in hopes of a better score, not trying impute motives to you, just how it comes across.
This is not a good angle for her pose. It makes her look scrunched and short. The opposite of what most modeling agencies want to see. There are to many yellow tones here which are washing her out to. 5
Good senior photo type shot. The overhead perspective adds a bit of fun. I would suggest adding in a bit of fill light from the back so you can see more of her hair.