Good shot. A little bit of quirkiness mixed with the cuteness would really work on any show targeted towards nerdy crowds (a good thing!). I think this would do well in a portfolio.
Its to bright and over exposed. There are distractions to the right of her right foot that needed to be closed out. Her pose is ordinary with no facial expression at all. 4
I really love her dress and she has a great look. There needs to be a bit of dodging along the left side of the frame (it is a bit gray) - but I love that you left the shadow so she isn't floating :-)