interesting choice of pose for you model, does not quite work for me. I think you needed another light source or reflector to remove/soften the shadow from her nose.
Shadows, shadows, shadows. It looks like she has been attacked by shadows. Her face is so shadowed it looks like she has a beard. Im just not getting it. 4
the lighting here is going to cost you, the shadows on her face are making it look like she has a 5 o clock shadow. she also looks pregnant. a little liquidizing on that would have flattened it out