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Hi cyphix,
Not bad for a first entry especially since zen isn't the easiest topics to shoot for. I think you did pretty good in terms of capturing zen quality. The smooth water and the floating rocks are very zen-like. The lighting and color are good but what holds this back is the composition/crop, IMO. The rocks needed a larger space to sit in to better maximize it's zen potential. In this square crop the rocks look trapped and the potential for a leading line to the floating rocks is diminished. Of course not knowing what your restrictions were at the time I can only speculate, but had you been able to use a taller or wider composition the extra space could have given this image more flow, more freedom and a more zen experience.
If you have any questions feel free to PM me. |
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