convert to black and white
vignette
remove distractions like debris from floor and a lighting conduit behind the model
some selective dodge, burn and blur
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nice classi stage show pose, her hand with the hat looks funny maybe don't let her spread her fingers so much. One of you lights need to be a bit lower to remove that harsh shadow near her eye in my opinion.