Very nice shot, however i feel the sky and foreground have too much drama and detail for a zen shot. It looks almost like the image was sharpened or you used Topaz or something on it :) The photo is brilliant however :)
The processing in this image is heavy enough that it makes the eye dart about the page looking at cloud details and cranes on the horizon. it seems to cut against the peacefull pose of the figure and the calm framing.
Too much processing in my opinion. Even if it wasn't so strongly applied, I don't think it suits the subject. It feels like you've just used it because everyone else does and sometimes they win.
The concept is great! However you missed the mark on 2 points. The processing is overdone and the shoreline at the other side of the water is full of distractions.