Not coming off well with me, I'm afraid. Soft and grainy overall, flat lighting and the model is not posed in a flattering manner. Should have pulled down her top a little.
This was a cute idea, but the colors in the couch and the overall darkness of the girl doesn't fit the concept imo. Also, she seems out of focus. Shooting with a bigger number on the aperture setting would have helped get her in focus. I would have had her wear something light colored as well.
Nice idea, but you have to pay alot more attention to details. It's too dark, the background has waves and a blue tone at the top, distracting... you can see the shadow on from the young lady.
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