She`s HAWT!!!!! I love the cigarette butt in the ashtray next to the bed - adds that little bit of class to the whole image. I can imagine that bed has seen some Whiterook action!
I like the way the image is tilted. Think it works well. The crap on the nightstand in the upper right is distracting. The lighting is also a little harsh and unflattering. Would be better if could get the flash off the camera and soften it up a little.
Maybe without tilt, but at least only the curtain as background and the clutter on the night stand not showing (or get rid of the clutter) would surely get you a higher place.
Unfortunately the flat, direct lighting and the lack of attention to environment really make the photo seem amateurish, and the lingerie, which is supposed to be the subject, is hardly noticeable. I think it would be better if everything else were dark and the lingerie was bright, rather than the other way around.