From the (un-qualified member of the) critique club:
Now, I am not a stickler for rules (most of which don't belong in art, but i digress) but it might help to crop this image up using the rule of thirds. I certainly love the idea and like the detail that you've captured here (in the sand, water) but constructively speaking, the image could use a crop to help the viewer smoothly consider the content since its (seemingly) meant to be open; I like the zen-like simplicity you've presented here.
I also like the vastness that you've captured with the clouds and the visual detail of the landmasses on the far side of the water.
Great work; happy shooting! |