Cute idea, but you didn't quite pull it off. Not liking the DOF between the hanging garments and it seems kind of thrown together in a couple of minutes just to get something submitted. Sorry, not trying to offend here.
For what it's worth, I think you should have gone with the same concept, but taken a shot of the room with the ceiling fan in one of the rule of third intersecting points preferably with a bed beneath it in the background (un-made and russled up of course) with just one garment such as the bra hanging down. I would have also considered making it a B&W or dark sepia tone to pull it all together. Good luck!