Good idea but terrible execution. The composition isn't visually appealing, and the nail in the coffin (or the screw in the sushi) was the use of a harsh direct flash for lighting, a big no no.
good colours and focus and imagination but it just doesn't hit me. It should!- the idea (I am guessing) based on the subject matter and arrangement is to provoke a response from the viewer but for some reason isn't doing that for me. I am wondering if it is a little to unsubtle... perhaps if you had panned back a bit so the shot at first glance looks like a fairly normal scene then forces a second glance to make the hit rather than the screws being pretty much in your face? Who knows... sorry but had to give it 5
This is a funny concept you have chosen. I am not a food photo expert though I think the food looks a little too moist to make me think it is delicious. I am not sure if you were going for something that looked like you would want to eat it or something that is kind of gross... What makes it look unappetizing is the moisture of the food and the harsh lighting. It could be a little overly sharpened. Anyway, it is a fun shot and something that I enjoyed voting on.
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