You take for granted that everyone who sees this picture will know what idea you are trying to get across or that these lights have some meaning that we can't see. I don't see what's so extraordinary, just my opinion.
The focus of your shot is a little dark, but i can see how you would have had problems with exposure on this.. Some fill flash with -1 stop or so flash compenstation might have been worth a go (Assuming your camera can do adjusted fill that is...)
Not sure what the title means. Two lights on a brick wall framing an exit sign. Seems far from extraordinary. What was the main subject/point of this image?
The color is interesting. Was it that color in real life or did you tweak the hue? The sign in the middle just begs for people to stare at it and try to figure out what is on it (I finally did after looking for a while). Might have worked better zoomed back a bit to see the light patters on the ceiling instead of the bricks below.
I have a very bright screen and still I can barely guess the two figures on that sign. Plus I don't quite see the extraordinary element in this. Sorry, doesn't work for me.
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