I don't really like this scene as a still image. It is too negative and not something that I would like to promote in any way. A lady should really be treated with respect no matter how angry they can make you feel and this just makes me want to jump in there and disrupt this whole scene. The looks of the actors are just too real for me, but I suppose that is what you were going for. As far as the lighting goes, it is obviously good with the large window or open space above. Good black and white conversion.
I am against violence on women. I personally would have rather you use a man as the victim, but for creativity and able to evoke some emotion (even though negative) I give you a 6