Looks like this has an over-all reddish cast - most noticeable in the peanut butter. I think your table has a reddish cast to it, and it tints the rest.
hmmm if this were mine i'd probably hope someone would comment- so I shall :-) - perhaps a solid colored background would have been a wiser choice? instead of a brown table that looks like it has lights over head reflecting on it- and is nearly the same color as the peanutbutter... the flash used left harsh shadows- a diffuser or something to that effect might have helped (tissue over the flash to mute it down a bit and give it more of a feathered feel sometimes works) perhaps arranging the display of the items more creativly to captivate your viewer? (ie: take a single slice of bread, do a swirly design of peanutbutter and jelly together on it and set it on a simple black or white background...? just suggestions thoughts-- I really hope that my comment helps - goodluck
other things to note - the saturation was punched a bit high for this entry- it looks like you dodged and burned some element out of the upper corner so its a tad distracting... perhaps even just a long exposure with one directional light would have helped? sepia/black and white /
While the three objects are in focus, I do not think this photo has very high quality. Especially the table has splotchy grainy lighting, and all detail in the red peanut butter lid is lost. I also do not find this a very interesting photo.
Honest feedback: Set up the shot so the background encompasses the entire frame. The right corner shows the edge of the table. Work on the color balance because it is pretty orange. (Perhaps because there is a lot of reds in the picture and possible use of wrong white balance setting.) The fill flash is pretty good here with no real hot spots.. good job on that. I think you used a high ISO because there is a lot of noise which could have been reduced with better lighting. (BTW: My wife loves fluff sandwiches without the peanut butter.)
I am guessing that is an American sandwich, cause I have never heard of it............A better organization, putting elements diagonally would have improved this, also some better lighting to remove the reflections off the table, or using some form of background (black) would have helped as well
One of my childhood faves! I remember those Fluffnutter commercials well. To be honest, the pic is not very good. Looks like the use of some harsh onboard flash and a bit oversaturated on the reds. Thanks for the blast from the past however.
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