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Moicano Smile.
Moicano Smile.
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Challenge: Children (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-450D Rebel XSi
Lens: Tamron SP AF 90mm f/2.8 Di for Canon
Location: Sao Paulo, SP
Date: Apr 3, 2010
Aperture: 2.8
ISO: 800
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Family, Children
Date Uploaded: Apr 3, 2010

 My son Daniel is 5 yers old.

He loves this moicano style hair.

But it gets special with this smile!

Today he was playing and I took this photo.

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Canon EOS-5D Mark IV
Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8 L USM
 04/12/2010 04:30:33 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Composition and Lighting: The lighting highlighting his hair is quite nice, cool backlighting. The composition seems far to centered to me. It may work for this photo, but maybe try position him on the left or right rule of thirds.
Background: to me, all the toys in the background, although suggesting childhood, seem to distract from the focal point.

Technical: The focus is nice. It seems like there is some graininess to this image that could be dealt with Neat Image or other noise removal software.

Overall: Great smile, next time try playing with the lighting and composition to create more of a wow factor.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
Canon EOS-5D
Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8 L USM
 04/11/2010 02:41:00 AM
nice portrait!
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Nikon Z9
Nikon AF-S Nikkor 105mm f/1.4E ED
 04/06/2010 04:58:13 PM
Seems a little orange - the counter in the background being tilted is distracting for me. I would try leveling that out and cropping a bit off the right so he is not so centered.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
Nikon D750
Nikon AF-S Nikkor 17-35mm f/2.8D IF-ED
 04/05/2010 01:33:18 PM
Nice mood, but the background is too cluttered.
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Nikon D40
Nikon AF-S DX Zoom Nikkor 55-200mm f/4-5.6G IF-ED VR
 04/05/2010 06:56:56 AM
showing off missing teeth?
  Photographer found comment helpful.
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