IMO, this is not the most attractive subject. Things that bother me about this shot are: Uneven, unkempt toenails, reddish tinge on the toes, injury on center foot big toe, and the background fairly screams shag carpet - detracting from the main subject.
Your framing, composition, and lighting are good.
I would guess 14, 20, 44 are also the ages left to right. Unless the reddish tinge on the toes is the result of editing, it looks like everyone has good circulation.
So, I am sorry about this, but I just can't give you a good score, based purely on personal taste.
There are 3 subjects and they take equal importance, but I find feet absolutely gross! And no matter how hard I try, I cannot look past that.