Of your "outtakes", I like this one the best. Good lighting, and an overall eerie, "hurry up and get out of here" feel to it. Would be nice to try and tone down the neon glow on the sign a little.
Hmmm, I'm not sure about this for a FS. I do like the composition & tone of this shot but I really like some of the others better. The windmill one is my favorite I think.