First I looked at it and thought, "that's a different perspective." Then I was like whoa! spider! Cool. Window in background is annoying but is blurred well by your DOF. Inspired by the selective desaturation challenge?
You havre a really nice desat - in a very interesting composition. The spider is a perfect accesnt. Make it better by cropping off the bright white traingle left top.
Lovely shot of the flower. The background really detracts though. Perhaps something placed between the flower and the house, construction paper or a sheet maybe? Oh, the spider is a great touch. :)
Mark
I love the simplicity of the flower and the spider but am not that crazy about seeing the window. I don't even mind the siding--it is a strong graphic compositional element. I'd either crop it tighter or clone out the window--but of course not for the challenge ;-)
You should have cropped some off the top to eliminate the distracting triangle of blown out sky and some of the glare from the windows. Otherwise, it's a nice POV and capture of the delicacy of the flower. I can't decide whether I like the silouhette of the spider or not.
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