I don't get this over the top, unnatural look. Sorry. I imagine she's a very lovely lady, but you can't tell in this shot. Detail is gone, the eye liner/makeup looks choppy (can't think of a better description, sorry), and it feels almost like a graphic rather than a photo overall. One of the more interesting focal points for this IMO is the extreme lower-right where you can see some detail in her hair and fingers. JMO of course. Good luck.
I really like the high key about this... and the composition is wonderful. I wish the eyes were just a bit lowered so we don't see the whites on the bottom... something about it throws me off. But, I'd odd. That's established. :) (not voting)