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04/09/2010 09:21:16 PMPost actions
Hi from Critique Club ( about Don't think about the exit ).
I believe that your idea with this photo is to shock people.
If I am right, you got it.
Perhaps, if you want a more harmonius image, I have some ideas:
1 - Less light and bright,
2 - All the face inside the image and
3 - A larger boarder.
Hope you like.
Oscar
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04/03/2010 05:26:54 AMPost actions
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04/01/2010 07:59:23 PMPost actions
Another great entry showind some imaginative thinking good on yer mate 10
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04/01/2010 12:27:44 PMPost actions
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04/01/2010 08:25:58 AMPost actions
The Title upped my score from a 5 to a 7. Creative!
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03/31/2010 09:49:27 PMPost actions
Love the lighting and the background, but the hand kind of looks like it's floating which is strange. I still like it though.
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03/31/2010 07:29:00 PMPost actions
I will try not to think about the exit... especially bcause you are eating bran with more fiber! Here, the lighting on the skin is pretty uneven. It seems wierd not to see an arm connected to the hand, almost as if it's disconnected.
03/31/2010 10:14:03 AMPost actions
Trying not to... The cereal looks pixelated in the light.
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