After doing some Ziser studies I used a Nikon D3s fitted with a 70 - 200 mm lens and a Paul Buff wireless trigger. The off camera flash (old Sunpak 522, in manual) was shot through a Zumbrella.
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It seems you missed the mark, focus-wise, and tried to correct in post. Somewhat botched up IMO (loss of detail and some oversharpening). Sorry, JMO. Good luck.
i really like your photo, i lovethe color of her eyes i only wish they were a sharper/ in focus. other then that i think its really nice hre skin looks really nice. nice work!