Lighting: Well lit, but seems a tiny bit over-exposed. There are a few places in the hat that have lost detail.
Pose: Wonderful, my only suggestion would be to have her look up a bit more.
Background: Works well with the model and outfit, but could have been a bit further back to diminish the shadow.
Very cute pose. Some of the lighter tones seem a bit "flattened" and maybe reddened, but that could also be my monitor or my eyes (I typically have trouble with red tones).
very pretty colors ...would have liked to have seen a sharper focus on the model's face. Found my eye drawn to the hat which to me seems to have the sharper focus
And she is! Wonderful expression and pose of model, choice of hat and dress combined with high-key tonality very good. Lighting is too strong and I also don't like the shadow picture right (girl's left), which shows some noise.
Very cute! Love the look in her eyes! Nicely composed. The lighting here doesn't do her justice though. Your colors are a little dull which to me means ya need more light. She also looks a little flat. Try movin' the lights around to the side a little more. You did get the catch light in the eyes spot on. Keep tryin' and post 'em so I can see!
TC
Her lipstick is very overdone and unnatural looking. Also, there is an unappealing white highlight or line running the entire length of her lower lip. The subject needs to be further away from the backdrop---about a foot and a half. Then, a separate light can be directed at the backdrop to further eliminate shadows. The lighting on her face is awfully harsh. Her arms received more flattering light than her face. The subject is cute and her outfit is very appropriate.
This is beautifull.
But because I get thes comments on my picture: The lipstick is overkill :)
I like the softness in this picture, and it's a lovely girl.
Just on the serious side, there are some dark shadows that maybe could have been avoided by different lighting. (7)
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