Greetings from the Critique Club!
Love the lighting and clouds you've captured. Composition seems both too far off center and too centered. Let me explain: the arrows which denote that this is an entrance are so close to out of frame that the lose emphasis. Yet the building is central which makes for an uninteresting composition. Perhaps if you had stood in the middle of the road, got close down to the arrow leading to the building or something to play more upon the entrance theme, this photo would have done better.
Also, the red sign to the right side distracts me. Though I do like the leading lines of the road and sidewalks. |