Hi from Critique Club.
I like you photo, but lost my focus when searching it visual elements.
Ideas for better image:
1 - The background lines may be ajusted to the horizon;
2 - A good crop to focus more in the center of the action;
3 - More light.
Look here how you photo may be: //sites.google.com/site/photoscritiqueclub/ .
Hope you like my ideas.
Oscar Burd |